By Ootsuki Miu
Overall: Homocheese
Smex Factor: Sexy Sexy
Art: Different
Status: Oneshot; complete
Review: The art isn't DIFFERENT per say... It's actually almost UGLY... But there's something cute about the way she draws sometimes... It's actually so indecisive that it pisses me off a little. The art is wobbly, and kinda shiny. I'm caught between loathing it and kinda liking it maybe.
It's basically what you'd expect from a BL oneshot: One boy confesses, the other thinks about it, then they have sex. Standard formula. Nothing special at all.
However, it almost seemed like she was going somewhere with the confessed-to-guy's best friend (the manly Micchan), but then HE disappears from the story without a point.
The sex scene explodes out of almost nowhere.
At first, Confessed-To starts badgering Confessor about...saying it again or something, I don't know, it's weird. And then in a surprisingly cute moment, Confessor tells him that he loves him again...And again, and again, and again. So many speech bubbles full of "I love you"!
I was actually taken aback a minute because it was cute.
And then they have sex and it's graphic, and squishy, and wet, and honestly made me feel a little uncomfortable. Like really. There were a couple of poses there that were definitely not sexy.
Whatta wimp though! Confessed-To starts crying the second Confessor puts his hand up his shirt! What is he, a girl? Dude, you don't have tits.
I commend her for actually drawing pubic hair though. THAT ain't a common sight.
Afterwards, Confessor seems to say, "You'll never see me again~" (not in so many words but--). WHY? WHO would mistake that for PITY SEX? Like honestly. HONESTLY. There's a limit to insecurity.
Also, slllup is not a sexy sound effect. Just saying.
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